Zirra's Return

Her Story -pg 02

Advertisement, August 23rd, 2017, 3:03 am
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Tehpikachu, May 4th, 2013, 10:40 pm
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WAIT WHAT - WHY DOESN'T SHE JUST KILL HIM RIGHT NOW?!

She's obviously not Genre Savvy if she's actually going to tell him a story before she kills him. Is she really that cocky? Pretty much every time a villain does that, they get bested right afterward. Sometimes the banter can lead to a short expositional story being told by the antagonist, but it rarely ever works THIS way! This way is a rather bad way of giving exposition to the readers.
She's telling him the truth about it. RIGHT BEFORE SHE KILLS HIM.

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